tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3832185204897173677.post5545984245685476402..comments2024-03-16T23:26:48.289-04:00Comments on T C C: Father Bergoglio and Admiral Massera, A Dirty War Gay Marriage of Convenience?M.McSheahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05809255693603458058noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3832185204897173677.post-26537249275696870982017-03-12T09:03:31.589-04:002017-03-12T09:03:31.589-04:00This would carry more credibility if you cleaned u...This would carry more credibility if you cleaned up your grammar and diction. "Like" -- as in "There is like an old underground right wing movement" -- may be ok in informal speech but not in expository writing. The same goes for "whatever." There are grammatical errors as well. The piece sounds like it was written by a gum-snapping teen. <br /><br />I respect that you are doing the research, and trying to get the facts, but your presentation does not do justice to the ideas you are trying to impart. If you will do the work of learning to write well, your words will carry more power, which will empower you.Ruth Henriquez https://www.blogger.com/profile/02805453429234393982noreply@blogger.com